Friday, April 30, 2010

worst turned into the best piece of writing

Worst pice of writing

Today while I was walking home from school I saw a wasp nest on the ground it had a whole bunch of holes in it so the wasps could stay and rest there it was very dry, there were no wasps in it so it must have been out in the sun and dried out on the inside there was one wasp I saw that flew into it and it was cool because it fit into one of the holes. The wasp colour was black and yello like a bee but not quiet like a bee more like a wasp sort of skinny and had a funny thing on it but a don’t think that was normal but it must have been and the wigs were long and kind of see through and looked like a leaf but not quite because it was see through but any way it was neat!!!!!! I mean cool.

Tuesday, April 6, 2010

SCARDY STUDENT

Scardy Student was so scared of so many things and what made it all worse was he just moved and now he has to go to a new school. Scardy Student was afraid germs, spiders, school, and other kids. On the first day of school, these two big tall grade 8 students started picking on him and making fun of him, like how he dressed and pushing him and Scardy Student didn’t now what to do so he ran right in to his math class which it took him awhile of running to find the right classroom finally he found it and ran inside just in time for the bell turns out the two big tall guys were in his class, and it went on from there. In gym class we played doge ball, the big two big grade kids were on the other team and they only went to hit Scardy Student so he ended up hiding in the equipment room for the rest of the gym class. Science class was after lunch, lunch didn’t go great either, but science class the two big kids weren’t in this class so it went well I met the teacher and the other students. (After science class is over only one more class till home time at least that’s what I thought I have to take the bus home and so do the two big kids and the bus driver doesn’t do much so I sat by myself and the two big kids threw stuff at me, it was awful until I got home. Then just as I was going into bed there was a spider in my bed, I hate spiders, this must have been one of the worst days of my life!) The next day of was a little better because Scardy Student knew some people and he made a friend named Peter. Peter knew everything about the school including the best hiding places. Peter himself wasn’t the coolest person in the school so that day wasn’t so bad and that’s pretty much how the rest of the year went until the last day of middle school, when the report cards were handed out the two big tall grade 8 students failed the grade and Scardy Student graduated and moved on to high school.