Worst pice of writing
Today while I was walking home from school I saw a wasp nest on the ground it had a whole bunch of holes in it so the wasps could stay and rest there it was very dry, there were no wasps in it so it must have been out in the sun and dried out on the inside there was one wasp I saw that flew into it and it was cool because it fit into one of the holes. The wasp colour was black and yello like a bee but not quiet like a bee more like a wasp sort of skinny and had a funny thing on it but a don’t think that was normal but it must have been and the wigs were long and kind of see through and looked like a leaf but not quite because it was see through but any way it was neat!!!!!! I mean cool.
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umm... This was a little hard to read. It was supposed to be banned words not missing periods and commas. Sorry, but you can do better, judging from your other posts.
ReplyDeleteLots of banned words here! 'Neat', 'cool', 'like', and even 'wasp' need to be replaced with colorful, precise words and phrases. Try again!
ReplyDeleteWord choice - inc.